Double page spread rough cut feedback

• Photo cut out better
• better sense of columns needed
• more content
• smaller font size
• image crossing centre fold less

Contents page rough cut feedback

• More consistent house colour
• Photo cut out better
• Stronger photo
• Features more justified
• More text required in boxes

Rough Cut Front cover feedback

• Clearer photo
• Change colour of 'Plus+'
• Rethink the font colour on the right (hard to see)
• More text
• Artist name 'Rosie' 'Rendles' should be less overlapping

Rough cut double page spread

This is my rough cut of my double page spread. I am most happy with my double page spread as it challenges stereotypical conventions of a music magazine. But doesn't look so unconventional that it doesn't work. Improvements I could make to this would be the text. As I have chosen a difficult layout it becomes difficult to organise text. Then also because my text is made up of different sections that cannot be mixed. It's a difficult challenge but if I can overcome it it will be effective. Overall I am pleased with my double page spread but still have a few alterations to make. I will post my feedback on my double page spread soon.